Tips or advice on my drawing before i move on? [pics]?

Please dont be rude.





READ THIS:








Im drawing this: http://s584.photobucket.com/albums/ss288鈥?/a>





%26amp; this is mine, its how far ive gotten[i kinda just started]:


http://s584.photobucket.com/albums/ss288鈥?/a>


http://s584.photobucket.com/albums/ss288鈥?/a>


http://s584.photobucket.com/albums/ss288鈥?/a>


http://s584.photobucket.com/albums/ss288鈥?/a>








-[Some^of my camera taking might be a little off or gone to the side a bit]


I know my pencils %26amp; paper arent very good....


Im not professional, im attempting.


Ive only did the outline so far but before i move on,


I think i made the eyes to bib but i dont know how to change it. D:


Any advice or changes i need to make about the eys, lips or


anything? I diidnt shade yet, the camera makes it look like i did.


but I dont want to mess up later on in details.





ALSO, my camera is very bad quality in pics, so sorry if you cant really see it. :[





Thanks so much!Tips or advice on my drawing before i move on? [pics]?
thats amazing!


will look even better when its done!


you dont need to change nothing, dont worry


its gorgous xTips or advice on my drawing before i move on? [pics]?
well realism is a beautiful art form. i would say you need to work on details. your not bad at all you're way better than i am at drawing.


here are some tutorials to help you (these really helped me) click on the images to make them bigger


http://cataclysm-x.deviantart.com/art/Tu鈥?/a>





http://cataclysm-x.deviantart.com/art/Tu鈥?/a>





http://cataclysm-x.deviantart.com/art/Tu鈥?/a>





http://cataclysm-x.deviantart.com/art/Tu鈥?/a>





i hope these help :)
Spider-Man says, I am being honest, and Spider-Man thinks it is, well... not very good.


EDIT: Spider-Man says, are you guys kidding me? Spider-Man thinks it looks like crap.


Advices: It looks like you draw very hard. Loosen up your wrist and do a very light sketch is the best way to go. Doesn't matter if its the outline or not, never deepen the outline before finishing it. You don't seem to slant the head, so that is also a flaw, slant the face a little including the eyes, nose ETC. Also, I don't like the way you draw the hair. Hair is suppose to light and smooth and suppose to get smaller and smaller, the way you draw it looks like giant clumps of mud.
Your propotions are slightly wrong e.g the eye and the hand. The best way i find to keep the propotions correct when i am drawing is measuring the drawing with my pencil. I would for example measure the head on my pencil and then draw it to an equal size and then measure the hand ect. It helps me to keep my proptions correct. You are also doing quite hard outlines. They need to tickle the page. If you do this then when you rub out mistakes then they would leave marks. You need to add more tone and shading to the picture. I think people are very hard to draw and you have given yourself quite a challenge.





Good luck
im not a professional either,


but i know that when you draw the eyes


doesnt matter from which angel you looked at it


both must be equally level, otherwise it will looks odd





btw here are some cartoon eyes sample to practice with


http://www.hairballstudios.com/tutorial/鈥?/a>
It doesn't look Professional, but you said you weren't a Professional, so it's okay. :)


It doesn't look realistic.





But that's my only problem.


For a beginner, I think it's pretty good.
Is a good enough outline, you just need to proportion the hands and eyes and stuff xD It will look much better when you add in the detail.=] Good luck wit the rest of it.
I always had trouble with the shape of my eyes as well, but this Video really helped me.





http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJ6S5u52Y鈥?/a>





Also, the way you draw your hands is beautiful, I'm jealous. (:





Hopw I helped. (:
They looks awesome!!!


Now- Answer mine, please:


http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AgMsc55L2NUK4ovBWGOhMXDsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20090630101807AA1Ei5Y
OMG!!! that is so good! i love the way you did the hair in that drawing it is great and over the years you will gey even better!
Great drawing! You are really good at drawing. Nice job!
looks really really good you';ve got serious talent
You draw like a self-absorbed pre teen.
I think it looks great you are a very good artist keep up the great work
tHe eye l00ks big, but other thAn thAt its keWL!
it's awesome and will look even better when it's finished, not many people can draw like that. you have a talent. :)
wow that really, REALLY good. i like it a lot, but maybe u should add a few more details to it.